Again I saw me alone on the street
Like a growing baby lost his support
Spotted by several eyes gazing @ me
Some are smiling in a cunning mean
As a tramp left lonely in a freezing dark
Some are blinking unexpectedly astonished
After perceiving ME turning into harsh
Some eyes are soft and filled with moan
Feeling my existence in the depth of heart
Some are strong and sensing them proudly
Like they crushed me as a being of art
But very few are sparkling with Life
Like they are giving me a reason to alive
They are partnering me like the moon and night
Eyes are shining for my soul
Like rays of mysterious and mounting light
very rhetoric and expressive... excellent usage of figurative language... you're a definite poet, no doubt...
ReplyDeletebut, you are never alone... just reach into your heart , u'll find names engraved ... take time to sigh, cry or whatever... but u r never alone... you're a sun rising, u shine and ur rays extend from there to beyond. keep it up!!!
@ jo- Thank you so much dear even ur compliment is nt less dan a poetry...
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